Key feedback from the Year 12 Media Class:
- lip syncing could be more enunciated/pronounced better, reshoot so less blurry too, however some liked the blur.
- fewer dancing scenes at the end - break it up with more scenes of the band
- good use of colour schemes
- photo effect is cool, perhaps transition and develop them more. more shots of photobook.
- good use of text to make narrative clear
- great use of iconography